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英语专八改错练习:家,可爱的家

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  "Home, sweet home" is a phrase that express an essential attitude in the United States. Whether the reality of life in the family house is sweet or no sweet, the cherished ideal of home _____1

  has great importance for many people.

  This ideal is a vital part of the American dream. This dream, dramatized in the history of nineteenth century European settlers of American West, was to find a piece of place, build a house _____2

  for one's family, and started a farm. These small households were _____3

  portraits of independence: the entire family- mother, father, children,even grandparents-live in a small house and working together to ___4

  support each other. Anyone understood the life-and-death importance _____5

  of family cooperation and hard work. Although most people in the United States no longer live on farms, but the ideal of home ownership _____6

  is just as strong in the twentieth century as it was in the nineteenth.

  When U.S soldiers came home before World WarⅡ, for example, _____7

  they dreamed of buying houses and starting families. But there was _____8

  a tremendous boom in home building. The new houses, typically in the suburbs, were often small and more or less identical, but it satisfied _____9

  a deep need. Many regarded the single-family house the basis of their way of life._____10

  答案详解:

  1. 将 no 改为 not

  2. 将 place 改为 land

  place是可数名词,作“地方”讲,而land意为“土地,田地”是不可数名词。例如:

  Solitude is a good place to visit but a poor place to stay.

  当你偶尔光顾时,独处是一个美妙的境地,但是如果久留,它却是一个糟糕的地方。

  There is a vacant piece of land near the house; we can build there.

  3. 将 started 改为 start

  start应使用不定式,以和前面的find, build一致。

  4. 将 working 改为 work

  work应该用第三人称复数,和live一致。另外,family在这里作“家人”讲,是复数。

  5 将 anyone 改为 everyone

  这里是要用everyone 指每个人,而不是要用anyone泛指。

  6. 将 but 删除

  7. 将 before 改为 after

  根据上下文判断,这里要表达的是二战之后。

  8. 将 But 改为 And

  根据语意,这里要表达的是递进关系,而不是转折关系。例如:

  When I do good, I feel good. When I do bad, I feel bad. And that's my religion.

  当我行善事,我感到坦然;当我行恶时,我感到内疚。这就是我的人生之道。

  9 将 it 改为 they

  10 在house the中间加入介词 as

  regard...as 作“把……当作……”讲。

  2011-11-10 : sarah86

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